Inka Arnazino

by Inka Mon Jan 27, 2014 12:42 pm

name: inka arnazino
gender: female
age: 3
desire rank: beta
current rank heir

the basics
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breed: mackenzie valley wolf.
height: 23 inches
weight: 55 kg
pelt: light ashen
eyes: hazel
scars: none

the persona
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inka is best at doing what others tell her, alpha or not. she is very mellow, and doesn't disobey anyone at all. her purpose in life, as suggested by her mother, is to one day perhaps create a family of her own, making plenty of allies and friends before age gets the better of her. upon leaving home and venturing numerous forests she presumes she, salathiel and poison are the only wolves around. she enjoys the company of those highly intelligent and values honesty

background
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born aside of her sister penelope, inka was the smallest of her mother’s litter weighing just under the average. as she matured and grew older wolves thought of her as weak. even her own father agreed with the majority of the wolves, but her mother however ignored how small inka was, she considered her unique unlike those who thought otherwise. being so small and agile inka could outrun most wolves, as well as tired prey quickly due to her increased speed. she proved useful during hunts, but this did not alter her position within the pack.

two years later inka's mother guinevere was caught during a chase, causing the older female to become trampled. her injuries were far to severe and and as a result she passed an hour or so later. this greatly affected esther as her mother seemed to be the only wolf who had faith in her. though it was not long before the pack overcame another threat, a forest fire.

most of the wolves fled along with her father azazel, leaving herself and a few others to suffer, if not burn within the flames that surrounded the forest. being trapped was one thing, but the fear of fire caught on and due to the fear overwhelming the she wolf passed out only to wake up alone lay among the ashes left from the fire. there was no other wolf around. perhaps they had joined her father? or perhaps the fire had taken them? all the female knew was that there was nothing left for her here and she had to move on alone.

travelling north of her former pack territory she came across many obstacles and threats, putting her life in danger, but she fought, and she fought hard through the weather, through her hunger and thirst and through her loneliness. it was not long before another's presence caught her snout, guiding her towards the unknown. she was eager to find the source, whether it be a danger to her or not, she had to find out. she could no longer live this life alone, she needed company, a friend, a companion, someone she could trust and perhaps even become a part of another family?

relations's
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mother: guinevere
father: azazel
sister: penelope
previous love/interest: n/a
mate: n/a
pups: tba

extra's
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habits: none
likes: adventure, fishing & hunting.
dislikes: annoyance, silence & ignorance
mottos/quotes: none

by **Kaipheus** Wed Jan 29, 2014 7:48 pm

Hi! I love you're wolf's name and colors, and this looks like it could be a great bio! I think it just needs some grammatical corrections, and a slightly bigger font lol ^.^

Also, you introduce a lot of characters that are never elaborated on, "Esther" "Salathiel" and "Poison" for example. I would suggest either cutting out the extra names, or expanding the bio to include these wolves if they are important to Inka's story. Best of luck!

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